WALT: Make our writing more descriptive.
A bird is sitting on a branch
A black nervious bird is sitting on a wavey bendy branch swaying side to side. His feathers on his wings are trying to escape because the wind was howling very strong and very loud.
A Tui bird is sitting on an Oak tree. The branchas are dancing in the wind slowly and quietly. Calmly the Tui is sitting in its nest.
A Pukeko is sitting on a thin old brunch. The dark green leaves fell off from the howling wind. The leaves were rusting up.
A fantail is sitting on an Evergreen tree branch. The wind is swifting through the air and the fantail tries to hold on to the branch from the strong wind.
A Blue Bird is sitting on a small branch. The wind is howling in the moon light . The rain is pouring down.